>bedroom pop/lo-fi acoustic jangle pop from Toronto, Ontario, Canada
>music to bash nathanoriginal over the skull to
>influences include: beat happening, early red house painters, alex g, sunny day real estate, daniel johnston, elliott smith, early weezer, ween's first few albums, and sebadoh
>entirely guitar based >experimental >acoustic direction in some tracks >ambient and drone also treated >all the samples and sounds exclusively made with the guitar
Feedbacks are really appreciated.
Michael Hill
Nice vocal processing, I wish the songs were longer but they're short and sweet. Some really simple instrumentation would help with extending them. If you carry on like the song you uploaded this month it would be cool.
Awesome mixing, the hi-hats are nice and tastey. Could imagine getting fucked up to this (in a good way).
Hahaha!! x) Hey thank you so much! I'll check you out right away! :)
Landon Thompson
are you sure about the talent part?
Colton Martinez
its obviously a copy paste from the time it was new.
Jacob Young
So fucking change it you pretentious twat.
Ryan Jenkins
Not even his shit is goofy and I am still listening to it... my gf doesn't care for it. Let me guess you are the same guy the stalks each thread hating on me daily but never posting any content. At least I'm out here, you hiding like a bitch.
Tell me why Benzo at almost 1000 plays and I got under 97 followers. Somebody hitting repeat senpai.
Alexander Ortiz
Yeah me, cant access my own stuff . Phone apps still work tho.
Adrian Hughes
YES. Have you even heard my voice? Everyone thinks i'm super talented and my lyrics are genius they took weeks to write down and everybody wants to be just like me!
>Samefaging hard Bro are you mad at someone? Who hurt you?
Josiah James
holy shat these consecutive numbers my dick is HARD
Bentley Butler
Holy shit this has to be bait.
Parker Perry
Thanks so much man, will do.
This is intense. Great idea but could do with variation more often imo but I like 8 - 16 bar phrases.
Hope this is you. Great sound, really industrial but warm and bouncey at the same time. Try more overdrive on the kicks and sounds to add character as well as more reverb and automation changes in between verses. Feeling the rap despite the language barrier.
Soooo moody, I imagine a wooden hut with whiskey when I listen to this. Same language barrier as above but I could listen to this and the shoegaze elements are really well done. Atlas is dope as fuck too.
Juan Carter
Putt your head inside your ass and clean yourself my man
Your voice is perfect for boasting and this style of dry aggressive trap beat. I'd love to hear it over a soul-y sample kinda track. I think it might go over my Russell Crewe track (OP)
Everyone be nice, this thread is for constructive criticism and plays.
This is lit, maybe try using more glitter effects in your mixing such as long long delays and fucking up reverb for that extra shine.
Actually so dope, clicked follow after 5 seconds. Love your branding and cover art as well.
Great guitar sound, try close micing your drums and adding some drive to them. Look up parallel compression too and add that. Vocals are lovely and a bit breathy but it adds to the sheeny sound. Catchy melodies too.
Your style is unique to you, you gotta express it like a bird has to fly.
Cool slowed down sample and drum sounds. Nice eerie cloud rap vibe.
Very pretty, could be used for soundtracking but nice and fills a room on its own. Maybe lay some vocals down?
>soundcloud.com/gno2k/klprlydnyfeo Awesome, awesome. Has a nujabes vibe on the first song but like lo-fi in a great way with boomy kick and a light touch. Also your album art is very colourful and suitable.
Really fun beats, love the 808. Reminds me of Lil Yachty a bit.
soundcloud.com/daanjoor/redlight-delite >beatz >lo-fi >boom bap if you really stretch your imagination this is my first time doing something like this pls be gentle
will peep other tracks immediately
Elijah Diaz
moi
this is exceptionally good for how simple it is, makes me feel like I'm 9 again :) I agree with other user, would be 10x better with some twinkly girl vocals on it
very nice usage of the sample, I love when the sample is transparent (like obviously there) but is still transformative, that blend is usually hard to do. drums are a bit airy, they hit like balloons on my speakers but they're still impactful. fw it, will give you a follow
dude i love nujabes too, if dude was still alive I probably wouldnt be as into this as I am. will give you a follow because you're really good at this but try to find your own style
honestly not really feeling this track, like I see what you're trying to do but there's waaay too much going on. I'd love to hear a version with less reverb/less pads/less hihat noise/less hihats/less everything
A lot of pain with the mastering but it was worth it. Hope you'll enjoy the ride.
Daniel Ross
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Levi Wilson
im not supposed to say this but im actually not even nathan he pays about 3 or 4 other guys to lurk round the clock and post for him
Luis Kelly
fuck you OP I ended up listening to it anyway and you control samples like they're instruments themselves I seriously fuck with the track you just now posted something heavy the techno part in the middle feels a little contrived, the vox lets it make a little bit more sense in the mix overall but it was a jarring transition. the second time the techno part comes in is also kinda off both of the two songs in this are extremely dope and I'm giving you a follow, you're making extremely dope shit that inspires me as a producer, but review my track you fuck I wanna know how to make better music soundcloud.com/daanjoor/redlight-delite?in=daanjoor/sets/menthol-infused-slaps
Thanks for listening dude, I seriously appreciate everything you said. Your shit is chill, High as a kite is my favourite and has the best mixing. Get Dilla/Nujabes vibes. and the atmospheric sounds are great.
Redlite Delite is really good as well, love the way it builds up. The drums are mixed too loud imo though, the first half is mostly them, though they are a good sound. Add more reverb and saturtion as their character deserves to be bought out.
I think of you is sweet too, maybe my fave, those vocal samples are beautiful. Could play that at a house party with lots of drugs.
Jaxson Morgan
I mean bring out the character of the sounds below the drums, there's cool stuff going on. It just needs to be mixed a bit more evenly.
yeah I feel what you mean about the drums, the beginning is mad barebones. if it helps I got someone who's gonna be doing vocals over it soon, massive ups for the critique
dystopian future. reminds me of that time i went to stockton and some some dude on the street using a laptop. try trippy keys/ melody. a little spooky. it's actually a little stressful to listen to. i imagined a intense highway scene from the dirty future that's out to get you. cool/10
your stressing me out man
if you stopped me on the street and handed me this track on cd and i went home and listened to it i wouldn't even be mad
really jammy. drums are cool guy jamming real fast down the street. big long steps. background reverbed "aaaaaa" sound is neat although it seems to cloud out the melody when it got louder a couple times. good trance staying pretty loyal to the original formula and not creating a mutant shitbag of a song that's trying to go edm like so many people are calling trance.
when i saw the alien and the horse pictures i thought i was up for some meme music only to find a groovy jam with some very fun parts. drums sound great but the guitar recording quality doesn't seem to be there. only complaint and it's not a big deal at all. fun compositions. little dodads thrown in for extra fun. what ever you do don't listen to elk melk fuck that. i recommend this music/10.
Jason Gonzalez
>folk punk/indie folk >california folk >ajj/front bottoms/neutral milk hotel
a project i started when i was 17 and just started getting around to recording. all of these were written two years ago. enjoy!