Rate the lyrics i just came up with

Rate the lyrics i just came up with

bad girl always treat me so mean
the baddest girl ive ever seen
but i love her, what else could it mean

black nails and shes lookin so bad
the best girl ive evre had
and she knows how to give it to me so bad

[chorus]
bad loving, lovin i can not do without
bad loving, lovin i can not do without
she gives me a bad, bad loving, baby
lovin, theres no doubt about

bad girl, always treat me so cruel
shes so bad makes me feel like a fool
but I love her, what else could it be

chorus

red lips and the welcome signs out
big hips want to show me what its all about
she says big boy, you keep me young and alive.

i say dark eyes your lashes so long
she says babe I heard that song
but I want her, need her oh so bad

chorus

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am i getting trolled

is this a joke

That might've been the gayest shit I've ever read

Id say a solid 2/10 you could do worse but youd have to try

what a crap, are you 13?

No dude wtf, thats a - 7 / 10
The kid is fucking retarded

Jesus Christ dude, are you autistic?

110 ℅

>it's bad

I've written some cringy-ass lyrics in my day but god dammit OP what are you even doing?

Lyrics always sound shitty on paper without a beat to go with it and /b is definitely not somewhere to ask how it sounds

I can't read it without a good beat fam

what is a good place to ask how it sounds

Are you fucking retarded?

Pray for blood
Pray for the cleansing
Pray for the flood
Pray for end of this nightmare
This lie of a life can as quickly as it came dissolve
We seek only reprieve
And welcome the darkness
The myth of a meaning, so lost and forgotten
take a hold of my hand
For you are no longer alone
Walk with me in hell
Pray for solace
Pray for resolve
Pray for a savior
Pray for deliverance
Some kind of purpose, a glimpse of a light in this void of existence
Oh...
Now witness the end of an age
Hope dies in hands of believers
Who seek the truth in the liar's eyes
Take hold of my hand
For you are no longer alone
>>Walk with me in hell(x6)
Take hold of my hand
For you are no longer alone
>>Walk with me in hell
>>Walk with me in hell
>>Walk with me in hell
You're never alone(x5)
>>Walk with me in hell

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>Randy Blythe posts on Cred Forums

nice op, what kind of style music you picturing?

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no, why

Heres how it sounds with a beat vocaroo.com/i/s135SwbNmw0w

rock n roll

It's been one week since you looked at me
Cocked your head to the side and said, "I'm angry."
Five days since you laughed at me saying,
"Get back together come back and see me."
Three days since the living room
I realized it's all my fault, but couldn't tell you
Yesterday you'd forgiven me
but it'll still be two days 'til I say I'm sorry

Hold it now and watch the hoodwink
As I make you stop, think
You'll think you're looking at Aquaman
I summon fish to the dish, although I like the Chalet Swiss
I like the sushi
'Cause it's never touched a frying pan
Hot like wasabi when I bust rhymes
Big like LeAnn Rimes
Because I'm all about value
Bert Kaempfert's got the mad hits
You try to match wits, you try to hold me but I bust through
Gonna make a break and take a fake
I'd like a stinking aching shake
I like vanilla, it's the finest of the flavours
Gotta see the show, 'cause then you'll know
That vertigo is gonna grow
'Cause it's so dangerous,
you'll have to sign a waiver

How can I help it if I think you're funny when you're mad
Trying hard not to smile though I feel bad
I'm the kind of guy who laughs at a funeral
Can't understand what I mean?
Well, you soon will
I have a tendency to wear my mind on my sleeve
I have a history of taking off my shirt

It's been one week since you looked at me
Threw your arms in the air
and said, "You're crazy."
Five days since you tackled me
I've still got the rug burns on both my knees
It's been three days since the afternoon
You realized it's not my fault
not a moment too soon
Yesterday you'd forgiven me
And now I sit back and wait 'til you say you're sorry

holy fuck u cant even play or sing

BAaarrsss

Chickity China the Chinese chicken
You have a drumstick and your brain stops tickin'
Watchin' X-Files with no lights on
We're dans la maison
I hope the Smoking Man's in this one
Like Harrison Ford I'm getting frantic
Like Sting I'm tantric
Like Snickers, guaranteed to satisfy

Like Kurosawa I make mad films
Okay, I don't make films
But if I did they'd have a Samurai
Gonna get a set a' better clubs
Gonna find the kind with tiny nubs
Just so my arms aren't always flying off the back-swing
Gotta get in tune with Sailor Moon
'Cause that cartoon has got the boom anime babes
That make me think the wrong thing

How can I help it if I think you're funny when you're mad
Tryin' hard not to smile though I feel bad
I'm the kind of guy who laughs at a funeral
Can't understand what I mean?
You soon will
I have a tendency to wear my mind on my sleeve
I have a history of losing my shirt
Death is but an illusion

It's been one week since you looked at me
Dropped your arms to your sides
and said, "I'm sorry."
Five days since I laughed at you and said,
"You just did just what I thought you were gonna do."
Three days since the living room
We realized we're both to blame,
but what could we do?
Yesterday you just smiled at me
Cause it'll still be two days 'til we say we're sorry

It'll still be two days 'til we say we're sorry
It'll still be two days 'til we say we're sorry
Birchmount Stadium, home of the Robbie

I got big balls that weigh 300 pounds
When I'm sleeping at night
They make funny sounds
When it gets too warm
They keep me cool
They keep me afloat in the swimming pool.

bad/10

try harder op
your idea of good is wrong
but that's not your fault

you are the product
of a well oiled machine
intent on blinding

the light the moths love
artificial, but so bright
don't stare for too long

nice haikus there bud
you don't need to condescend
to prove a point tho

just don't be a dick
it really is that easy
though, yes, we are moths

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What the fuck it doesn't even rhyme

As someone who does shows and gets paid to do them, I'll give you a little advice OP (believe it or not, I don't give a shit).

I think you need to go back to the drawing board. I try to rhyme, yeah, but I listen to the beat first and mold my words to the sound. Your words are off beat.

>she's so bad makes me feel like a fool

Try adding a one syllable adjective to fool, or even "such a fool". They more syllables you have, the better/faster finding it'll be and that's what people wanna hear. Don't be afraid to add words, as long as you're not gasping for breath at the end of a line.

Good luck OP.